Thursday, October 16, 2008

Free Write #1 La

Free Write #1- Graded.Block 2- Due by October 15th at 10pm.Block 1- Due by October 16th at 10pm.What is your favorite fall activity? Who do you do the activity with? When do you do it? How do you feel? Describe the activity to me. Be as detailed as possible. Make sure that you have 300 words for this free write. Hint- Write the freewrite into a word document. Check the word count in the document then copy and paste it over. (this paragraph right here is about 70 words)

My favorite fall activity is football and raking leaves. Football gives me something to watch. Raking leaves gives me exercise. I watch football during October through February. I rake leaves October through mid November. I feel great watching the Steelers win and the Browns lose. I feel great when I rake leaves. I rake leaves in the fall because it's easy when u have a riding mower and a grass catcher on the back to rake the leaves. It makes it so easy. Sometimes it takes hrs. to go on the riding mower. It still takes longer to rake leaves. I like the fall because I know that my birthday is close (November 3.). In the fall I trick or treat on Halloween. Fall is fun when the leaves fall to the ground. Fall is the time of year to do a lot of yard work before the snow comes and you can't do anything. I do a lot more in fall and summer than spring and winter. When fall comes you know that winter isn't very far away at all. Fall is the last time to do the best tings outside, because when winter come you can't do as much as you can when its warm out. While fall is here you should enjoy it. I also like fall because I know Christmas isn't very far away either. The main thing I do during fall is celebrate my birthday with family. The other reason I like fall this year is because I'm getting braces on October 23rd. I know that when I get them I won't like them but right now I'm excited. During fall I'll play with my dogs a lot more than usual. I know that during winter my dogs hate being outside for to long so they spend a lot of time outside during the fall getting exercise. (312 words)

1 comment:

Slawinski2008 said...

+9 Your braces look good! Hope they didn't hurt to much! Remember to show people only when you don't have food in your mouth! Remember to use separate paragraphs for each idea!